poemranker ::Within by temptalia

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Free verse № 48236

Within

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Apr 2003 · 0 comments

You're there here embedded, traveling far beyond these caverns with winding, twisting roads that mislead and misguide with each subtle bend and turn; deep within and far out of reach by sensibility only touched by the dangerous vulnerability that accompanies such a dreaded feeling; a sense of fear and excitement adrenaline coursing wildly, only to stop, end; finalize itself and leave jagged scars and open wounds behind in its wake.

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