|  |  | Within (Free verse) by temptalia
 
 You're there
here
embedded, traveling
far beyond these
caverns with winding,
twisting roads that
mislead and misguide
with each subtle bend
and turn;
deep within
and far out of reach
by sensibility
only touched by
the dangerous
vulnerability that
accompanies such
a dreaded feeling;
a sense of fear
and excitement
adrenaline coursing
wildly,
only to
stop, end;
finalize itself
and leave jagged
scars and open wounds
behind in its wake. 
 
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	Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335Posted: April 28, 2003 7:54 PM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2003 7:54 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1666665
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