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Within (Free verse) by temptalia
You're there here embedded, traveling far beyond these caverns with winding, twisting roads that mislead and misguide with each subtle bend and turn; deep within and far out of reach by sensibility only touched by the dangerous vulnerability that accompanies such a dreaded feeling; a sense of fear and excitement adrenaline coursing wildly, only to stop, end; finalize itself and leave jagged scars and open wounds behind in its wake.

Up the ladder: At the circle K
Down the ladder: The Bastard Earth

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1666665
Overall Rank: 5014
Posted: April 28, 2003 7:54 PM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2003 7:54 PM PDT
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