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Free verse № 61354

Stargazing Illusionist

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Aug 2003 · 7 comments

Those dark nights filled with the dynamic hallucinations of fantasy gone wild, with insane creations sprouted from a lost child. Pictures take over the walls.. I sit watching, learning slowly how to change the shapes into entire galaxies. Its strange what a dreamer see's an ocean of possibilities in the chaos storm multiplexed universes spread endless in the tree of time.. Caged I may be with the walls and bars of my social/mental prison but my reality has no boundaries. Vision: Wheat field dancing with the wind and soft hands running over the grain. A white dress floats over moist dark soil Blue ribbon tied in a childs fashion... Channel changed: Train station cave filled with bonfire trash cans. An old bum sings in drunken slurs while blood pours from the gunshots covering his stomach. Cable Vision: The void tunnel, tv screen tornado; a storm of dimensions waiting to be explored.

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[4] Joe-joe 20-Aug-03/5:25 AM Reply
Got a bad batch of shrooms huh? Stick with the purple microdot or windowpane...more reliable stuff..know what I mean?
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › Joe-joe 20-Aug-03/5:53 AM Reply
No..
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › Joe-joe 20-Aug-03/6:03 AM Reply
LSD, Salvia, Ibogaine, MDMA, 2ct7, amt, 5-meo-dmt, 5-meo-dipt, 2cb... yeah, my medicine closet. dont forget about the grass and huge collection of bongs.. oh and the 200 dollar bag of meth..
[6] Settle 20-Aug-03/6:11 AM Reply
skipped everything after the first line, too long.
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › Settle 20-Aug-03/6:13 AM Reply
.... too long? short attention span man? WANT A METH INJECTION!??? ;/
[n/a] <~> › DreamerSupreme 20-Aug-03/9:22 AM Reply
lee? not too long--just done to death before. you are getting la-zeee.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › <~> 21-Aug-03/3:13 AM Reply
no im not. ;/ ok ok, i wont argue.. bleh.. you never fail to ride my ass, thanks. shall do better..