| Re: Paper Bag Scenario by dragonfly |
7-Nov-03/3:45 PM |
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"Rave" reviews here. The curse of trying to find intelligent life on this planet. Solitude is far less troublesome but no more friendly at times.
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| Re: It was... by Shardik |
7-Nov-03/3:29 PM |
There once was a thing called spud,
that went by the name of âStudâ.
Akin to a wanker
and always a yanker
but your dreams were never a dud.
McCrumpets, anyone?
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| Re: a comment on All Alone In A Selfish Moment by ARTIE |
24-Oct-03/3:12 PM |
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Crude, my dear 'oet. Throat fucking is a pleasure, incest with MY sister is unthinkable.
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| Re: verruca by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
24-Oct-03/2:53 PM |
"Cherish" doesn't work.e with the "eh" suff-ends of the first two lines. How about "Warts ne'er Dimish."?
A personal exercision and cauterization is in order. You may cherish that moment.
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| Re: a comment on First Time In A Long Time by EAger to Offend |
24-Oct-03/2:40 PM |
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Savory Display. Now I have a craving for BBQ. Smells like the work of a bovie wafting through an OR hallway.
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| Re: Backyard by <~> |
24-Oct-03/1:20 PM |
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I have but to gaze upon my own backyard here. Nice vision. 10
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| Re: Three Fall by <~> |
24-Oct-03/1:15 PM |
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It chills the warm cockles of my forgotten admonition to stay out of the water. Good vote though.
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| Re: Breasts by Stephen Robins |
24-Oct-03/1:05 PM |
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Dr. Fuhrmenbresten says, "If you've seen one...you've likely seen 'em both." Not sure the reference to pubic hair fits in the grand scheme of breasts, but, I like the last two lines. 9
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| Re: My Guardian Angel by ramtheman1 |
18-Oct-03/9:43 AM |
I lost my best friend ever - my wife. I often want to look back, but know - that to exist, I must not turn my gaze. The voice is in front, looking back at me.
Good job.
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| Re: Torment by ThoughtfulSoul |
18-Oct-03/9:21 AM |
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The voices in my head (I too am not alone) often tell me to jump - which I do, straight up - until I realize that gravity is not my friend. I find myself falling right back in, my sudden grip lost. My torment. Nice.
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| Re: a comment on Facial Bliss by ARTIE |
18-Oct-03/8:48 AM |
Oooops! My apologies sir! I obviously hit the wrong key.r
However, I enjoy a good spanking from time to time. I think I'll hold out for the quail though.
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| Re: a comment on Facial Bliss by ARTIE |
17-Oct-03/10:43 PM |
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Jizzed a minnet Ms. Silver, does this mean you won't be going to the spa for a facial anytime soon? "Sick" you ask? "No respect" you ask? I'd respect you more if you didn't use a hanky. Remember what the Colonel said?
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| Re: Nicole by sliver |
17-Oct-03/8:26 PM |
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Was "the light at the end of the tunnel" a bullet firing? Such cowardice. I liked the last stanza best, the third one leaves me wondering if you just need to get out with your consoling friends - eat some weasel, tastes like wabbit. Nicole's a bitch - get over her - get on with it. Emotional otherwise.
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| Re: a comment on Facial Bliss by ARTIE |
17-Oct-03/7:51 PM |
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I'd prefer a Dove - a pleasurable antitheses - although I could set it afire and bring out the laces and whips - no sticks - too medieval at this point. Dave needs a "hall pass".
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| Re: a comment on Facial Bliss by ARTIE |
17-Oct-03/6:52 PM |
To each his own those lonely nights when dusk-to-dusk becomes too slow, for Lucifer, the light. ("Seven Screaming Diz-Busters")
BOC
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| Re: a comment on Facial Bliss by ARTIE |
17-Oct-03/6:29 PM |
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You don't get out often, do you? Living a sedentary life hanging out in a deli will not bring you this happiness unless you convince the Starbucks waitress to follow you home and deliver the groceries. Nice Haiku though.
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
10-Oct-03/7:34 PM |
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One has only to read [most of] the string of comments above to realize that DA's third verse is the genius that confused, then offended and then inspired all of you to quickly "pull your open blouses closed" thereby revealing your own prudish personal brawl, the subliminal "clothing" that protects the spew of your ment. DA mocked - and won. That ot to be wth a tn.
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| Re: Santa Ana, California by bondjedi |
24-Jul-02/9:58 PM |
Good Haiku! Great imagery! "10"
Geeeez! Can one ever receive valid critique in this venue?
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| Re: summer by itchiwitch |
24-Jul-02/9:56 PM |
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Good Haiku! Great imagery. Geeeeez! Can someone just submit a reasonable criticism once in a while in this venue? "10"
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| Re: Eclipse 99 by hlatkins |
24-Jul-02/9:53 PM |
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I could see where I was going, until I decided instead...to go to bed. But, I like it.
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