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verruca (Haiku) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
Crusty foot blemish, Imported by the Flemish, A wart to cherish.
Up the ladder: Bed
Down the ladder: The Red Chain
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9680
Posted: October 24, 2003 2:16 PM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2003 2:16 PM PDT
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[5] ARTIE @ 66.68.146.139 | 24-Oct-03/2:53 PM | Reply
"Cherish" doesn't work.e with the "eh" suff-ends of the first two lines. How about "Warts ne'er Dimish."?
A personal exercision and cauterization is in order. You may cherish that moment.
[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.234.177 > ARTIE | 25-Oct-03/4:40 PM | Reply
RE: "Cherish" doesn't work.e with the "eh" suff-ends of the first two lines.

Sorry, I only accept coherent comments.
[10] Stephen Robins @ 195.92.198.74 | 24-Oct-03/2:59 PM | Reply
Splendid - 10- ignore Artie he is gay and didn't go to RGSHW
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 25-Oct-03/8:05 AM | Reply
Don't be garish.
I'm better than you.
I'm sliced bread.
[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.234.177 > horus8 | 25-Oct-03/4:48 PM | Reply
You cannot thwart me with your pseudo-haikus.
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