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summer (Haiku) by itchiwitch showering raindrops
steamy wraiths rise from pavement
heatwave's crazy dance
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Posted: July 24, 2002 2:18 AM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2002 2:18 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.9545455 Overall Rank: 1360 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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24-Jul-02/4:22 AM
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East coast humidity can fell the highest constitutions. <you're up late>
Good Haiku! Great imagery. Geeeeez! Can someone just submit a reasonable criticism once in a while in this venue? "10"
Those last lines can be a pain in the ass.
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