poemranker ::Of Gods & Beast In Villanelle by Bachus

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Villanelle № 99010

Of Gods & Beast In Villanelle

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Apr 2004 · 6 comments

I was not the only lion sighing Humbled by my lady's grace Our Keep is cold, this city's dying. The past... It needs no justifying So much for 'saving face' I was not the only lion sighing. Pride is no longer satisfying So take my courage just in case Our Keep is cold, this city's dying. The laws of love are worth abiding When, and if, you set a pace I was not the only lion sighing. Your ways are ancient and reminding Of ether realms and inner space Our Keep is cold, this city's dying. My head is low, my mane is hiding Secrets no beast should embrace I was not the only lion sighing Our Keep is cold, this city's dying.

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6 comments

[10] zodiac 26-Apr-04/7:54 PM Reply
Ace.
[8] Shuushin 27-Apr-04/8:21 AM Reply
thematically consistent.

too bad it only has two rhymes (okay, that was a joke for blindpoe's benefit)
[n/a] Fear of Garbage 27-Apr-04/11:02 AM Reply
Oh yes. That's very good.
[10] zodiac › Fear of Garbage 27-Apr-04/11:23 AM Reply
Fear of Garbage, I have to nominate you for Current Sexiest Poemranker User, especially in light of the recent sudden abdication of that post by Joe-joe. Jesus, you're enough to make an old man consider pederasty.
[0] deleted user 17-Sep-04/7:01 PM Reply
This poem is dying!
Crap once again!
[0] klosterfobik 19-Sep-04/4:30 PM Reply
0 at the least!