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summer (Haiku) by itchiwitch

showering raindrops steamy wraiths rise from pavement heatwave's crazy dance

ARTIE 24-Jul-02/9:56 PM
Good Haiku! Great imagery. Geeeeez! Can someone just submit a reasonable criticism once in a while in this venue? "10"




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