Re: The Glint by peaceseeker	9-Dec-03/10:37 AM
Except for a couple of light redundancies, I liked the message but got tangled in the flow. Maybe I should've had my coffee first.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Dec-03/3:21 PM
I like it, but, why is Jesu your only salvation, or abysmal help? Some consider Lucifer to be the Guiding Light. Once embraced - one sees the Light, the Path from the abyss. Interesting context indeed.
Re: The man of steel by <{Baba^Yaga}>	12-Dec-03/3:28 PM
Mmmmm.... "Mutton Biceps". You're chasing that with whine I hope.
Re: The Freemasons by Bachus	17-Jun-04/10:14 PM
Ever read "Sarum" by Edward Rutherfurd? Those [eventual] Masons "Rocked" the free World to come. Satan and Pagan ruled for centuries. Embrace an Icon??? Stonehenge is offlimits now.
Re: West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco	17-Jun-04/10:23 PM
Wuz "you" really right..??..even if you'd never been to Calif? No sand in your shorts? I was enthralled by the West Coast promenade many years ago, but, I had no right to stay. Good vote to you.
Re: "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE	21-Jun-04/3:04 PM
"doth", "do'eth", "does"; I chose "doth" just because...er...well... I used to read a lot of Shakespeare's sonnets. Ok, maybe it is a little out of date. Thanks for your inputs. This will be a work in progress as I really liked the way this first stanza turned out. I'll have her call again soon and inspire me toward more. Stay tuned.....
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jun-04/3:12 PM
Schizopoda or Macuran, touche! never the less. One of your best.
Re: My Friend? by Blade	30-Jun-04/10:14 AM
Hmmmmmm... It would make more sense to me if it were "by barstools that have Gone-awry-a." They have no clout whatsoever.
Re: Blobby song$ by MR Blobby	30-Jun-04/10:25 AM
Damn! All I see is a blob upon my sheetmusic! I had a playfully good time trying to put a tune to this, but alas, blobby blob, blobby blob, I lacked the syncopation. It's nice to know you're loved though.
Re: Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom	31-Mar-11/7:56 PM
A little "wordy" and somewhat essential and intrinsic. However, it works in a diminished cerebral way. 8-9 score
Re: Dance Of Insanity by forsaken	31-Mar-11/8:01 PM
Have you grown up dreaming of a disenfranchised Jeffrey Dahmer? He's dead. Come back.... come back to the World in which the rest of us live. Sanity is knot a b-b-bad thing.
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	31-Mar-11/8:30 PM
There once was a poett named D'Angel Whose words try to be quite playful He'll work up a rhyme tho' he'll often commit grime 'cause to others he's often quite hateful.
Re: FHjk by Dark Angle	31-Mar-11/8:42 PM
There once was a man named d-Angle whose dick couldn't find a quadrangle he'd pop a blue pill which made him quite ill but his mum was left quite tranquil
Re: Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt	31-Mar-11/8:46 PM
Stunt.... Stunk.... Stunts Wholly fun-k "Fat-Man"
Re: Journey To The Centre Of The Loom by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	31-Mar-11/8:50 PM
3rd stanza is somewhat weak but overall this is very good..... "return to tend the gloom"
Re: She Dreams of Yesterday by Phalkon	28-Oct-14/1:07 PM
She dreams of yesterday - because now that she has opened her mind to the reality of despair, she harkens back upon a simpler time.
Re: Hey by impert&ent	28-Oct-14/1:30 PM
When lit only by a fading memory, it's the sleeping neurons that require enlight-&-ment.
Re: It snows in July by daniella	2-Jan-15/3:04 PM
hair weeping.... brain thinking because the night sky was weeping into your hair... Now I am weeping and the tears are seeping but I gotta stop to wipe my nose - Overall I like it - 7.5
Re: it is my turn this season by daniella	2-Jan-15/3:12 PM
If your heart beats fire beneath another and then you ride him into the ocean... did you switch places? Overall I liked it. reminds me that there is another lobe to the brain - not left nor right but from the "light side" of the brain. Gotta check out Daphne's website...
Re: Hobo. by SupremeDreamer	7-Apr-15/8:03 PM
Fuck you who looks down on me-- when Rome falls, you'll be fucked while I'll finally be set free. Set your own fucking condescending self free. Vulgarity obviously hasn't worked. Look around and realize, you shackle yourself.