Re: a comment on Hobo. by SupremeDreamer	9-Apr-15/4:32 PM
I am not in the least bit hurt. I used to like many of your works but, aye and alas, you have fallen from grace lately.
Re: Hobo. by SupremeDreamer	7-Apr-15/8:03 PM
Fuck you who looks down on me-- when Rome falls, you'll be fucked while I'll finally be set free. Set your own fucking condescending self free. Vulgarity obviously hasn't worked. Look around and realize, you shackle yourself.
Re: it is my turn this season by daniella	2-Jan-15/3:12 PM
If your heart beats fire beneath another and then you ride him into the ocean... did you switch places? Overall I liked it. reminds me that there is another lobe to the brain - not left nor right but from the "light side" of the brain. Gotta check out Daphne's website...
Re: It snows in July by daniella	2-Jan-15/3:04 PM
hair weeping.... brain thinking because the night sky was weeping into your hair... Now I am weeping and the tears are seeping but I gotta stop to wipe my nose - Overall I like it - 7.5
Re: Hey by impert&ent	28-Oct-14/1:30 PM
When lit only by a fading memory, it's the sleeping neurons that require enlight-&-ment.
Re: a comment on A mag that PAYS??? by SupremeDreamer	28-Oct-14/1:17 PM
Ah yes, the aloneness of drinking isn't really selfish, more like "Dev-lish". Unleash the demons!
Re: She Dreams of Yesterday by Phalkon	28-Oct-14/1:07 PM
She dreams of yesterday - because now that she has opened her mind to the reality of despair, she harkens back upon a simpler time.
Re: a comment on "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE	2-Sep-14/4:49 PM
Thanks and it was an irony; to love lost and a love to gain. I waffled between "did herald my way" and "did herald my day" but I think the past/present tenses would've worked in either case.
Re: a comment on what is poetry 101 by Skamper	17-Aug-14/11:20 PM
Skamper - I am trying to imagine..... Better yet, take a chill pill whilst I ponder first. Stress kills. Breathe deeply...... use your imagination.
Re: a comment on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	31-Mar-11/8:57 PM
I did not write that. Someone stole my IP
Re: Journey To The Centre Of The Loom by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	31-Mar-11/8:50 PM
3rd stanza is somewhat weak but overall this is very good..... "return to tend the gloom"
Re: Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt	31-Mar-11/8:46 PM
Stunt.... Stunk.... Stunts Wholly fun-k "Fat-Man"
Re: FHjk by Dark Angle	31-Mar-11/8:42 PM
There once was a man named d-Angle whose dick couldn't find a quadrangle he'd pop a blue pill which made him quite ill but his mum was left quite tranquil
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	31-Mar-11/8:30 PM
There once was a poett named D'Angel Whose words try to be quite playful He'll work up a rhyme tho' he'll often commit grime 'cause to others he's often quite hateful.
Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	31-Mar-11/8:13 PM
w-e-a-k....(gasp - wheeze...gasp) p-p-pull my finger...
Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	31-Mar-11/8:11 PM
Sorry I've been away for so long and sorry to see you have nothing more to offer mankind than your sorry poetic manifestoes of self-[bravado]. Go ahead and seek what you [wish] to reap for you will be pushed like a beaver up the stream - dam-ned to succeed. Your sarchasm is not as [deep] as you may feel.
Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	31-Mar-11/8:06 PM
Very intelligent. What's neckst?
Re: Dance Of Insanity by forsaken	31-Mar-11/8:01 PM
Have you grown up dreaming of a disenfranchised Jeffrey Dahmer? He's dead. Come back.... come back to the World in which the rest of us live. Sanity is knot a b-b-bad thing.
Re: Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom	31-Mar-11/7:56 PM
A little "wordy" and somewhat essential and intrinsic. However, it works in a diminished cerebral way. 8-9 score
Re: Blobby song$ by MR Blobby	30-Jun-04/10:25 AM
Damn! All I see is a blob upon my sheetmusic! I had a playfully good time trying to put a tune to this, but alas, blobby blob, blobby blob, I lacked the syncopation. It's nice to know you're loved though.