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what is poetry 101 (Free verse) by Skamper the door swung inward
did i request your presence
imagination
Up the ladder:
Through the eyes
Down the ladder:
I like Cake
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Posted: August 30, 2012 6:47 AM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2012 6:47 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.023713 Overall Rank: 7487 Comments:
ah...now we get to the gist of the review...the form is mute. Your need to vent your childish/spitefulness is forefront. No matter how much you SHOUT doesn't make you right. An opinion is valid only with genuine thought.
Genuine? So are you insinuating that someone other than I came up with this thought? ... O.K. retard. I must be a puppet then? Right...!!!!
BTW.. Just take notice that no one else bothered to respond to this crap... I'm the only one who genuinely thought to give a fuck, vote, and voice my UNIQUE opinion. Everyone responded with?... Silence. Biatch! How do you like that one? Eh? Also, text doesn't shout, even in capitals, unless your brain processes it so. :X GEN-U-WHINE. Now skamper along, punk.
You know why you're so mad? Because I didn't declare it the greatest piece I've ever read... What is poetry? You thought to express that in a senryu/haiku? Mr. Haiku would punch you in the face. Honestly, he would. In my hey-day? I'd have awarded you with a fucking zero. Don't get all defensive and BUTT-HURT!!!
Oh shit, did the yelling upset you? ... Fucking asshat. Be thankful this isn't face to face... I'd let you know what yelling sounds like. :D
first of all...thankyou for your passion and extreme reaction...forgoing the obvious, that you really need sedation or at the very least intervention. I know I am a POET, and you are merely another wannabe nay-sayer who, will felicitate my rise to fame. Skamper
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