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Nicole

by sliver

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Oct 2003 · 9 comments

My heart has been shattered and broken Lost in shadows blacker than coal But a light at the end of that tunnel Guided me out of that hole. Now I lie her torn and bleeding I'd need a miracle to make me whole. So I subject myself to your mercy; Will you come back and love me Nicole? I know there's a pretty good chance That you've already found happiness. But until I'm in your arms I'm afraid I'll never know such bliss. My one and only weapon To hold back the worst of the pain Were memories of my love for you And those will forever remain.

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9 comments

[10] electroman1979 17-Oct-03/8:03 PM Reply
great poem, i can feel the emotion, keep up the good work 10
[n/a] sliver › electroman1979 17-Oct-03/8:09 PM Reply
Who knew you were here tonight too. Thanks man.I'll submit another in a few.
[7] ARTIE 17-Oct-03/8:26 PM Reply
Was "the light at the end of the tunnel" a bullet firing? Such cowardice. I liked the last stanza best, the third one leaves me wondering if you just need to get out with your consoling friends - eat some weasel, tastes like wabbit. Nicole's a bitch - get over her - get on with it. Emotional otherwise.
[n/a] sliver › ARTIE 17-Oct-03/8:36 PM Reply
Actually I knew her in like 7th grade or something. But she's REEEALLY hot now. Need to get back in touch. Anyway, I'm over it. Just memories dribbled onto paper with a little added emotion.
[n/a] sliver › sliver 17-Oct-03/9:11 PM Reply
Reeally?
[10] deleted user 17-Oct-03/8:54 PM Reply
Good poem Sliver, You like Electroman are both SO much better then me! - 10 of course
[n/a] sliver › deleted user 17-Oct-03/9:03 PM Reply
bratsy, you are very good, It runs in the family. Don't be disappointed if my poems are perfect{LAUGH}.Keep it up, I really enjoy everything you've let me read.
[10] Katzclear 2-Nov-03/1:07 PM Reply
Well if that's just "added" emotion...umm.. you're good at adding emotion lol
[10] donmiguel1960 22-Jun-04/7:16 AM Reply
heart crushing