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Nicole (Lyric) by sliver

My heart has been shattered and broken Lost in shadows blacker than coal But a light at the end of that tunnel Guided me out of that hole. Now I lie her torn and bleeding I'd need a miracle to make me whole. So I subject myself to your mercy; Will you come back and love me Nicole? I know there's a pretty good chance That you've already found happiness. But until I'm in your arms I'm afraid I'll never know such bliss. My one and only weapon To hold back the worst of the pain Were memories of my love for you And those will forever remain.

ARTIE 17-Oct-03/8:26 PM
Was "the light at the end of the tunnel" a bullet firing? Such cowardice. I liked the last stanza best, the third one leaves me wondering if you just need to get out with your consoling friends - eat some weasel, tastes like wabbit. Nicole's a bitch - get over her - get on with it. Emotional otherwise.




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