| Re: The Poison by TheTiredTyrant |
22-Jul-02/5:07 PM |
Oh straightened back,
on slab of stone,
so tense, no slack,
you're not alone!
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| Re: Existence; Part 1 by ARTIE |
22-Jul-02/4:49 PM |
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| Re: The Mirror Man by Mister Cakes |
22-Jul-02/4:47 PM |
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A paradox, or utter paranoia? Stop looking there!
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| Re: Small and Simple by venusdemilo |
22-Jul-02/3:28 PM |
The breakup of a Relationship; A study of Sociologic pathology.
(Sociology 101)
We all "stumbles" through this.
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| Re: Wondering Eyes by Holden |
22-Jul-02/3:24 PM |
Whether to "Wander" or "Wonder", Will Angels set you free?
Coexistence herein, is truly the key.
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| Re: Stranger by mytenderrage |
22-Jul-02/3:17 PM |
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Let us go for a walk, past the cemetary of time. You'll awaken.
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| Re: Craving by mytenderrage |
22-Jul-02/3:14 PM |
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We all crave love, or the chance to bake muffins. Anyone who needs to see a shrink, needs to have their head examined! I like it.
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| Re: Suffocating by mytenderrage |
22-Jul-02/3:10 PM |
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There is help available. Vallium, Darvocet, any narcotic will suffice. Take two, breathe deeply, and call me in the morning. The doctor is "In".
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| Re: The Eyestroke by seebergerb |
22-Jul-02/2:58 PM |
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2nd stanza says it all for humanity! It reminds me of another poem. See my letter to time.
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| Re: The Sea by venusdemilo |
22-Jul-02/2:56 PM |
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Existentalism in its simplicity. Taoism struggles within this!
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| Re: HERE TO THERE by ARTIE |
22-Jul-02/2:02 PM |
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That "mushroom trip", as psylycybic(?) as it was, may as well have been 12 years of marriage...as the story was told. Love is often unfortunate!
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| Re: Why we're here by ARTIE |
18-Jul-02/9:46 AM |
Ah..., but for the chance, a muffin to bake, I realize now, my haiku mistake!
Can I borrow a spatula?
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| Re: Death and the Non-Scanning Poem by tooniron |
18-Jul-02/7:21 AM |
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I like it, but, after the first three lines I was struggling with the flow. The only good cat, is a dead cat!
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| Re: Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
17-Jul-02/6:21 PM |
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Hmmmmm! This smells of....not the F.B.I., but of why?
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| Re: Clit by unknown |
17-Jul-02/5:51 PM |
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Oh, Dark Angel, if your "maximum grid in Paintshop Pro" is blocking your view, how can you even comment on the last line? Go for it Razorgrin, dive in and seek.
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| Re: The End! by ARTIE |
15-Jul-02/5:07 PM |
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Oh my Dog! There is cleverness in your tone! Very well....
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| Re: THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8 |
15-Jul-02/4:59 PM |
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Geeeeeez! What are you in for?
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| Re: The End! by ARTIE |
15-Jul-02/4:36 PM |
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Oh...Dark Angel, you amaze me. I really thought you had moved beyond fisting, it's so passe anymore. Oh my DOG! What have I done?
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| Re: Your Smile by ARTIE |
15-Jul-02/4:23 PM |
Oh, Dark Angel, what have you done?
You couldn't see the need for a smaller glass? You can dish it, but you cannot take it. In my irreverant dyslexia, "Oh my Dog! What have I done?" Ask horus8 for a Zanex, it'll all be well.
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| Re: Your Smile by ARTIE |
15-Jul-02/2:10 PM |
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Sorry, but the real answer is: You, need a smaller glass!
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