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The End! (Other) by ARTIE
Twisted, fisted, rambling drunk falls, Sees dark angels on the wall. Cold, and naked, his lifeblood stopped, "One small glass!", his last call!

Up the ladder: Office Blues
Down the ladder: Confessor's Nightcap

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.201706
Overall Rank: 4531
Posted: July 15, 2002 2:48 PM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 2:48 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 62.190.174.80 | 15-Jul-02/4:04 PM | Reply
Oh... oh, yes, I see. So someone told you about my fisting hobby. And what of it? You would have done the same. O Jesu what have I done...
[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Jul-02/4:10 PM | Reply
Pops flip the flask often i take itC
[n/a] ARTIE @ | 15-Jul-02/4:36 PM | Reply
Oh...Dark Angel, you amaze me. I really thought you had moved beyond fisting, it's so passe anymore. Oh my DOG! What have I done?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 62.190.174.80 | 15-Jul-02/4:49 PM | Reply
You speak of fisting in jest? I'll thank you to take fisting as seriously as any other kind of sexual intercourse.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.158.28 | 15-Jul-02/4:59 PM | Reply
There once was a poete named ARTIE / Who fisted a girl at a party / But he got quite a fright / When he turned on the light: / His mum said she found it quite hearty
[n/a] ARTIE @ | 15-Jul-02/5:07 PM | Reply
Oh my Dog! There is cleverness in your tone! Very well....
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