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Confessor's Nightcap (Free verse) by Limness
Sweet little treat, cannoli and coffee She tells me about his dick She blew him, she screwed him She didn't stay over But left him to go find his friend He wined her, he dined her, He took her to bed He got her drunk; she gave him head. He kicked her out at 11 o'clock And went to her sister--who then sucked his cock He stole it, they rolled him, She did it for cash He's hoping his parents Don't find his stash If ears retained, like tablecloths, The stains of dinners past Spilled out on clean white linen Where families broke their fast Mine would glow a rosy hue Much drunker than the wine That fed us all, helped us forget Our sins, our past, our crimes

Up the ladder: The End!
Down the ladder: going

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.201706
Overall Rank: 4532
Posted: August 27, 2002 12:15 PM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2002 12:15 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 27-Aug-02/1:28 PM | Reply
so, what do you do for fun, other than lend an ear??
[7] Venus @ 198.81.26.167 | 30-Aug-02/12:24 PM | Reply
I like your style - it's very underrated so far - I can't be the only one, can I? 7/10
[8] god'swife @ 66.14.87.50 | 16-Oct-02/1:12 PM | Reply
You are very sexy.
[n/a] Limness @ 167.206.181.179 > god'swife | 17-Oct-02/6:39 AM | Reply
takes one to know one, mamasita.
[9] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 17-Oct-02/1:28 AM | Reply
I don't know what it is - maybe it's the time of morning - but I think this is hilarious. You have a sly style and I like it. 'If ears retained'etc is genius.
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