Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

The Eyestroke (Free verse) by seebergerb
Reflections - scene - the world without glasses, stark and white, now the colors come together and become something more, a dash and a line, a stroke of gold and a picture - we sleep among the visions we desire, wretched and beautiful, the hidden message beneath all, always there like a haunted mist (that shuttles us into those realms we fear) but we resist, push back, and acknowledge the seniority of time against our statement of being - when the angels in their white wings come down to earth and give us the courage to withstand the winds.

Up the ladder: Brainy Smurf
Down the ladder: Impermanence

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 11
.. 01
.. 00
.. 21
.. 01
.. 01
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 4.111111
Weighted score: 4.5555553
Overall Rank: 12661
Posted: May 26, 2002 6:05 PM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2002 6:05 PM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[7] ARTIE @ 66.68.148.241 | 22-Jul-02/2:58 PM | Reply
2nd stanza says it all for humanity! It reminds me of another poem. See my letter to time.
153 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001