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The Eyestroke (Free verse) by seebergerb
Reflections - scene - the world without glasses,
stark and white, now the colors come together
and become something more, a dash and a line,
a stroke of gold and a picture -
we sleep among the visions we desire, wretched
and beautiful, the hidden message beneath all,
always there like a haunted mist
(that shuttles us into those realms we fear)
but we resist, push back, and acknowledge
the seniority of time against our statement
of being - when the angels in their white wings
come down to earth and give us the courage
to withstand the winds.
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Posted: May 26, 2002 6:05 PM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2002 6:05 PM PDT
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