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The Eyestroke (Free verse) by seebergerb

Reflections - scene - the world without glasses, stark and white, now the colors come together and become something more, a dash and a line, a stroke of gold and a picture - we sleep among the visions we desire, wretched and beautiful, the hidden message beneath all, always there like a haunted mist (that shuttles us into those realms we fear) but we resist, push back, and acknowledge the seniority of time against our statement of being - when the angels in their white wings come down to earth and give us the courage to withstand the winds.

ARTIE 22-Jul-02/2:58 PM
2nd stanza says it all for humanity! It reminds me of another poem. See my letter to time.




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