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Stranger (Free verse) by mytenderrage
Who am I? I am my own stranger. I am not the one Who speaks Who feels Who wonders. I cannot hear myself When I scream. I cannot feel it When I am stabbed By your daggers. I do not feel the blood As it drips down From my violent wounds You have inflicted on me. I am numb. I do not care about anything. Nothingness is what I am. Nothing but a shadow A dark mirage That no one sees. Who am I? I am but a stranger No one knows me. Not even myself.

Up the ladder: Clit
Down the ladder: Perfect

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5555556
Weighted score: 4.2777777
Overall Rank: 13151
Posted: July 22, 2002 1:34 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2002 1:34 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.109.217 | 22-Jul-02/1:49 PM | Reply
Gloom 'n' woe. I getcha. Your life is a dark closet of darkness.
"Ve ah nihilists.Ve beleef in nuthink"-the big lebowski.
[8] ARTIE @ 66.68.148.241 | 22-Jul-02/3:17 PM | Reply
Let us go for a walk, past the cemetary of time. You'll awaken.
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Jul-02/3:25 PM | Reply
nothing over something times -god over everything equals life. Math don't lie.
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