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Small and Simple (Free verse) by venusdemilo
What seperated us was Small and Simple A misunderstanding Words were said too fast We stumbles over ourselves We just got lost in the confusion What seperated us was Small and Simple You weren't listening I couldn't hear you It was late and we were tired Just tired that's all What seperated us was Small and Simple Now do you understand Just a misuderstanding

Up the ladder: Feel My Fear
Down the ladder: Nothing

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.193176
Overall Rank: 13231
Posted: July 22, 2002 2:43 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2002 2:43 PM PDT
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[5] ARTIE @ 66.68.148.241 | 22-Jul-02/3:28 PM | Reply
The breakup of a Relationship; A study of Sociologic pathology.
(Sociology 101)
We all "stumbles" through this.
[1] kawakurdi @ 62.6.84.67 | 22-Jul-02/4:56 PM | Reply
If we could understand misunderstanding there would be no act of misunderstanding in the first place. A pointless argument.
[n/a] venusdemilo @ | 22-Jul-02/9:05 PM | Reply
pardon the typos... my deepest apologies.
[n/a] venusdemilo @ | 22-Jul-02/9:09 PM | Reply
thats the whole point of the poem... the paradox in the explaination.
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