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Small and Simple (Free verse) by venusdemilo

What seperated us was Small and Simple A misunderstanding Words were said too fast We stumbles over ourselves We just got lost in the confusion What seperated us was Small and Simple You weren't listening I couldn't hear you It was late and we were tired Just tired that's all What seperated us was Small and Simple Now do you understand Just a misuderstanding

venusdemilo 22-Jul-02/9:09 PM
thats the whole point of the poem... the paradox in the explaination.




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