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Feel My Fear (Free verse) by -vz18-
Alone in this world until the day I met you A person I could love and trust My wish finally came true! You told me you loved me so many times Your love was priceless for me The more you said it, the more I thought 'This was meant to be' But you took your love away from me And left me here to cry For a moment I was weak, but then I grew strong I realized so many things, the love I felt was wrong I don't need you in my life No more do I wish to be your wife The love I had for you is gone I played your games for quite too long I cried before and shed my tears But now it's your turn to feel my fears -VZ18-

Up the ladder: Deep-Fried
Down the ladder: Small and Simple

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.193176
Overall Rank: 13230
Posted: May 28, 2003 10:03 AM PDT; Last modified: May 28, 2003 10:03 AM PDT
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[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-May-03/10:59 AM | Reply
It's rock hard, truly.
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