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The Sea (Free verse) by venusdemilo The sea goes on forever
As does my soul
The sea has many names
As do my emotions
The see is always changing
As does my mind!
Up the ladder:
scarred
Down the ladder:
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Posted: July 22, 2002 2:44 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2002 2:44 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.865529 Overall Rank: 10328 Comments:
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ARTIE @ 66.68.148.241
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22-Jul-02/2:56 PM
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Existentalism in its simplicity. Taoism struggles within this!
The sea is full of plankton, though.Your mind clearly isn't.I like this.
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