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Craving (Free verse) by mytenderrage It is a craving,
I just want more.
Your touch
Your embrace
Your tenderness.
I was in heaven
When I was there
Lying in your arms.
I wish it could be forever.
I crave for you
I crave for the affection
I crave for the softness
I had missed so much.
I wish we were forever.
But life is not like that.
Nothing is that easy.
Nothing is that simple.
I just crave for you,
Hungry for your love.
Wondering.
Wishing.
How will it last?
How could we last?
Or will there be nothing
After you go away?
Up the ladder:
A Sonnet for Barbara
Down the ladder:
uninvited guests
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Posted: July 22, 2002 1:37 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2002 1:37 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.4 Overall Rank: 12983 Comments:
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ARTIE @ 66.68.148.241
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22-Jul-02/3:14 PM
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We all crave love, or the chance to bake muffins. Anyone who needs to see a shrink, needs to have their head examined! I like it.
tis a raven tap tap tap outside my window.
Obviously the motivation is there. Try to creat a story, paint us a picture of the two of you.
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