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uninvited guests (Free verse) by teacup
Little black dots. Across my kitchen floor. They caught me by surprise. So I go to the cupboard, I get what I need. Then I scream "die, foul ants, die!!"

Up the ladder: Craving
Down the ladder: *Round*

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.4
Overall Rank: 12989
Posted: October 20, 2002 12:36 AM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2002 12:36 AM PDT
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[10] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.120 | 1-Nov-02/6:56 AM | Reply
The single worst point in my life was when I found out my house had ants, by pouring ant-infested cereal into a bowl. didn't eat cereal for a very long time after.
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Dec-02/12:01 PM | Reply
sweet water melon seeds they're everywhere!e
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