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Craving (Free verse) by mytenderrage

It is a craving, I just want more. Your touch Your embrace Your tenderness. I was in heaven When I was there Lying in your arms. I wish it could be forever. I crave for you I crave for the affection I crave for the softness I had missed so much. I wish we were forever. But life is not like that. Nothing is that easy. Nothing is that simple. I just crave for you, Hungry for your love. Wondering. Wishing. How will it last? How could we last? Or will there be nothing After you go away?

god'swife 4-Sep-02/9:17 AM
Obviously the motivation is there. Try to creat a story, paint us a picture of the two of you.




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