poemranker ::The Mirror Man by Mister Cakes

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Free verse № 5687

The Mirror Man

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

Is it he or I? He's watching me.... HE'S WATHCING ME!!!! I can't escape. Do i want to escape??? He's watching me. And i'm watching him

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[5] johnnyfontaine23 22-Jul-02/4:07 PM Reply
My first reaction was complexity, i undersatnd the writers grief, but i feel he has created a paradox for himself in his lack of content. At present, it just looks like a simple stalker poem, a kinda art nouvea rip off of teh late 1950's stalker poems of the late Jay Durham.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Jul-02/4:20 PM Reply
Yes... you like to watch, don't you, Mister Cakes? Well perhaps you should watch out. I know all about your little 'incident' with the half-eaten shoehorn and the moist pizza.
[4] ARTIE 22-Jul-02/4:47 PM Reply
A paradox, or utter paranoia? Stop looking there!
[6] shwenatjadeflower 28-Jul-02/12:04 AM Reply
you are just looking in the mirror. nice way of explaining it though. watch mothman prophesies and you'll see scary shit about mirrors. :)