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The Mirror Man (Free verse) by Mister Cakes

Is it he or I? He's watching me.... HE'S WATHCING ME!!!! I can't escape. Do i want to escape??? He's watching me. And i'm watching him

johnnyfontaine23 22-Jul-02/4:07 PM
My first reaction was complexity, i undersatnd the writers grief, but i feel he has created a paradox for himself in his lack of content. At present, it just looks like a simple stalker poem, a kinda art nouvea rip off of teh late 1950's stalker poems of the late Jay Durham.




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