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Equaled Us (Free verse) by ifni
It's times like these I wish I could say I know you, Distant in your fear, Distance in your face; Gently passing away, I hear you Passing me by Taste/touch/sensation What more could I pry From your empty hand? Teach me to fly, Open my soul and soar away Fleeing all the pain I raise Fleeing all the fear you faced Fleeing our simplest equation: One plus one Equaled us. 3.14.02 JV

Up the ladder: The Mirror Man
Down the ladder: The Real You

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8
Weighted score: 4.7377534
Overall Rank: 11708
Posted: August 7, 2002 4:43 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2002 9:04 AM PDT
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