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The Real You (Free verse) by venusdemilo
The pain I hold inside No longer can I hide Screaming in the night You ignore me with all your might Dehydrated from the many tears shed Remembering the deafening words said I cry and stop and cry all over again I try so hard to make amends But you see right through me And the real you I see.

Up the ladder: Equaled Us
Down the ladder: Madi

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8
Weighted score: 4.7377534
Overall Rank: 11714
Posted: August 10, 2002 9:18 PM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2002 9:18 PM PDT
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[7] ramtheman1 @ 66.65.187.91 | 18-Oct-03/1:49 AM | Reply
nice
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