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The Real You (Free verse) by venusdemilo
The pain I hold inside
No longer can I hide
Screaming in the night
You ignore me with all your might
Dehydrated from the many tears shed
Remembering the deafening words said
I cry and stop and cry all over again
I try so hard to make amends
But you see right through me
And the real you I see.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8
Weighted score: 4.7377534
Overall Rank: 11714
Posted: August 10, 2002 9:18 PM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2002 9:18 PM PDT
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