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Your Smile (Free verse) by ARTIE Comes the night, gloom of darkness, with its ethereal subdue,
T'is you I feel, in my dreams, so warm and close - it's true.
Sense my hands, explore the curves, your form of endless beauty,
For in my mind, my touch for you - t'is only earthly duty.
With my lips I'd touch, so soft and warm, this sweetness I do miss,
Are my desires to share, not but one with you - this thing we call a
kiss.
And o'er your legs I'd stroke, and else for you, that happy climactic
place,
For t'is not just mine, soft smile I see......but that upon your face.
Up the ladder:
WorkingDream
Down the ladder:
grope
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.1
Posted: July 15, 2002 12:00 PM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 12:00 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.55 Overall Rank: 12699 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 62.190.174.80
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15-Jul-02/12:56 PM
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At first I thought this poem was rubbish because it was difficult to read. But once I understood what you were saying, I realised it was complete crap.
Oh, ARTIE. It matters not how full the glass is, but whether it contains the Holy Lifeblood of Christ. For only by partaking of Jesu's blood may we hope to conceal our sinful, everlasting nudity.
But I like my everlasting nudity, especially with a pair of knee high boots and a black fedora.
I, wish I knew what you were talking about!
"God damnit" I had such a good comment at the tip of my finger for this Art, but then I read Dark Angel's and was doubled over, so i'm just gonna settle on a Zanex and smile.u
I giveth but I taketh not? And who does that remind you of, my child? That's right: a vending machine. It's true that a vending machine taketh your money. But in return it giveth you delights far beyond your imagination! And is that not what I have done for you?
Slightly naughty with sweet undertones. I like it.
If I were in my " all-is-well-with the-world-rose-colored-glasses" mood I would say this is a beautiful poem well deserving a ten. Unfortunetly I am quite vexed so you get a 7 for useing good vocabulary
Like a bent uncut penis doing it's dirty work in my colon.
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