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Wondering Eyes (Free verse) by Holden
I wonder on,
Who could 1 Be,
A Lil to the Left,
A Lil to the Right,
Then your sure to see
Ignorance is Bliss,
But Bliss is Sweet,
Sweet is but Taste,
Taste is of Mind,
Mind is of Matter,
Matter is of State
Mind is the most Powerful on Earth there be,
to waste is nothing less than sheer tragedy
Are your eyes truly open,
Do you truly see,
What one can achieve,
What one can be
Ones wrongs and wrights are judged under one eyes only,
No mortal mind nor eyes can question ones being on this land.
Being touched by none but an angel,
Is sure to set you free,
So keep your eyes open,
Is the Angel coming for thee
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Overall Rank: 12676
Posted: July 22, 2002 12:07 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2002 12:07 PM PDT
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