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Wondering Eyes

by Holden

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

I wonder on, Who could 1 Be, A Lil to the Left, A Lil to the Right, Then your sure to see Ignorance is Bliss, But Bliss is Sweet, Sweet is but Taste, Taste is of Mind, Mind is of Matter, Matter is of State Mind is the most Powerful on Earth there be, to waste is nothing less than sheer tragedy Are your eyes truly open, Do you truly see, What one can achieve, What one can be Ones wrongs and wrights are judged under one eyes only, No mortal mind nor eyes can question ones being on this land. Being touched by none but an angel, Is sure to set you free, So keep your eyes open, Is the Angel coming for thee

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[5] deleted user 22-Jul-02/12:42 PM Reply
"you truely have a dizzing intelect" - princess bride
[6] ARTIE 22-Jul-02/3:24 PM Reply
Whether to "Wander" or "Wonder", Will Angels set you free?
Coexistence herein, is truly the key.
[9] daniella 4-Aug-02/6:33 PM Reply
sweet believing.