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Consequences

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

For love there is always a price, no matter the cost For me, a great friendship was lost For one night, the night I told you how I felt When I looked into your eyes, I began to melt But god dammit, I was there for you, through thick and thin And in my heart so bad I wanted love to begin You didn't feel the same, dammit you led me on And now that I need a friend, you're already gone Shit, I should have listened to my friends, I shouldn't have told you Because the consequences of telling you how I felt isn't worth what I'm going through So maybe that's it for me, maybe I won't give love a second glance god dammit, you didn't even give me and you a fuckin chance Before you went and found you someone better, someone who will "treat you good" But, you know I would treat you like a princess, I'd give you the world if I could Well, I wish you the best with your new love, I wish you the best of luck It just hurts to this day, knowing that you never really gave a fuck

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[0] ==Doylum 1-Aug-02/9:02 AM Reply
I know your hurtin honey, but try to keep it all in. Cause by bringing it all out in the open your hurtiig everyone else. Your turing my brain to putty arrghhhhh