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Eclipse 99 (Lyric) by hlatkins A circle of blackness on a white sheet of paper
A crescent of light burned into my head
A feeling of stillness on the moon-darkened pavement
But I still wish I'd gone down to Cornwall instead
Up the ladder:
Butterflies
Down the ladder:
Tall can of Budweiser
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Posted: July 24, 2002 2:52 PM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2002 2:52 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.153681 Overall Rank: 5180 Comments:
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ARTIE @ 66.68.148.241
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24-Jul-02/9:53 PM
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I could see where I was going, until I decided instead...to go to bed. But, I like it.
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