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Tall can of Budweiser (Haiku) by bondjedi
go ask your mom, boy I have to clean the gutters she will give you love

Up the ladder: Eclipse 99
Down the ladder: Ignored

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.571429
Weighted score: 5.153681
Overall Rank: 5181
Posted: August 4, 2002 7:57 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2002 7:57 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 4-Aug-02/8:52 PM | Reply
Profound.
[10] Agemo-Z @ 142.166.108.249 | 4-Aug-02/10:15 PM | Reply
Ahh, the haiku. Beautiful.
[9] Tarquin De La Bog @ 213.120.56.45 | 14-Aug-02/10:07 AM | Reply
A successful Haiku makes words seem irrelevant. This has it in abundance. 9. Brilliant.
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