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Ignored (Free verse) by PK
Sometimes I feel so un-alive
Like my presence does not survive
I hate this feeling that is within
Like my existence has already end
They ignore me all the time
Like my opinion is a crime
I hate this feeling that lurks within
Like my existence never began
I cry and cry for days and weeks
But still no one dares to peek
Through my world to see what's wrong
Or dare to think that this will last long.
My heart breaks each time i speak
When i realize there is no repeat
Am i not loud enough to hear?
Or could it be that i am just not here?
I wish I could rewind the time
And turn myself into a chime
Loud and clear would i be heard
Instead of just being misunderstood
Sometimes I feel so unalive
Like my presence does not survive
I hate this feeling that is within
Like my existence has already end
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.571429
Weighted score: 5.153681
Overall Rank: 5183
Posted: September 2, 2002 2:24 PM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2002 2:24 PM PDT
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