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Lines

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

If the lines were smooth, But the words weren`t true, Would it mean more than My tongue tripping over you?

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4 comments

[n/a] <~> 4-Sep-02/10:29 PM Reply
swank riddle.
[n/a] god'swife 4-Sep-02/11:26 PM Reply
Took me a couple of readings to understand. If you make the line break at more, the pause would help comunicate the thought.
[8] debased 25-Nov-02/6:40 PM Reply
cute
[7] cyan9 23-Nov-05/7:55 AM Reply
Something that I think everyone thinks at some point, put very clearly, although the last line one would suppose should mean that your tongue was trying to trick you; except your tongue tripping over imples that somebody else had caught you.... perhaps a little more than meets the eye here, or someone looking to hard???