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Lines (Other) by OneFingerAnswer If the lines were smooth,
But the words weren`t true,
Would it mean more than
My tongue tripping over you?
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Posted: September 4, 2002 10:15 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2002 10:15 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.153681 Overall Rank: 5184 Comments:
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swank riddle.
Took me a couple of readings to understand. If you make the line break at more, the pause would help comunicate the thought.
cute
Something that I think everyone thinks at some point, put very clearly, although the last line one would suppose should mean that your tongue was trying to trick you; except your tongue tripping over imples that somebody else had caught you.... perhaps a little more than meets the eye here, or someone looking to hard???
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