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Eclipse 99 (Lyric) by hlatkins

A circle of blackness on a white sheet of paper A crescent of light burned into my head A feeling of stillness on the moon-darkened pavement But I still wish I'd gone down to Cornwall instead

ARTIE 24-Jul-02/9:53 PM
I could see where I was going, until I decided instead...to go to bed. But, I like it.




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