on whilst the bells ring by richa
15 Aug 2003, 8:16 AM
actually got chills at the last two lines... must be worth a 10
on on your birthday by peaceseeker
13 Aug 2003, 10:56 PM
Certainly better than blue-mountain, but not quite the chorus to Henry V:
"O, pardon! since a crooked figure may
Attest in little place a million;
And let us, ciphers to this great accompt,
On your imaginary forces work."
"O, pardon! since a crooked figure may
Attest in little place a million;
And let us, ciphers to this great accompt,
On your imaginary forces work."
replying on Pina Colada Belle by Don-Quixote
10 Aug 2003, 3:27 AM
still an apology of sorts but no amount of logic can defend against 'toke my snake'.
replying on Lord of the Swines by <{Baba^Yaga}>
10 Aug 2003, 2:25 AM
What, no snicker about lamiacious?
replying on I, Ann Boleyn by http://mulberryfairy
10 Aug 2003, 2:19 AM
So we have a triumvirate? How would you describe yourself?
replying on Yellow Cake for Everyone by Retaliate
10 Aug 2003, 2:11 AM
Maybe karma's a corn dog deep fat fried.
replying on 1967 Ford Carmine Jalopy by SupremeDreamer
10 Aug 2003, 2:06 AM
you know supreme (can I call you that?)
of course I can , because as I've said... I'm drunk
Horus said something to me recently .. um er.. to Retaliate recently that his Mentor (the capital was conspicuos) apparently told him:
(and this has caused me to think about the subject dammit)
"You've strung together some nice words" was the phrase.
Is it possible that increasing one's vocabulary actually decreases one's effectiveness as a poet?
Or maybe that's just the homebrew speakin'
(As a fellow LA dweller I appreciate the humour, but I'm going to find you and burn your car to a briquette so that you can claim insurance and the environment can sleep better)
of course I can , because as I've said... I'm drunk
Horus said something to me recently .. um er.. to Retaliate recently that his Mentor (the capital was conspicuos) apparently told him:
(and this has caused me to think about the subject dammit)
"You've strung together some nice words" was the phrase.
Is it possible that increasing one's vocabulary actually decreases one's effectiveness as a poet?
Or maybe that's just the homebrew speakin'
(As a fellow LA dweller I appreciate the humour, but I'm going to find you and burn your car to a briquette so that you can claim insurance and the environment can sleep better)
on Musings: Willow Sculpture by SupremeDreamer
10 Aug 2003, 1:45 AM
(I'm currently drunk so take my words at that).
I really like the idea behind this poem, so humor me supreme. I think the use of 'stooped' in the first stanza is not a strong enough descriptor. I also think that the second stanza (the double use of leaves in particular) actually cheapens the sentiment behind what you are getting at.
We can all only wish that our poems weather like stone: lasting a mortal eternity, yet yielding to the wisdom of of those who tread after.
I really like the idea behind this poem, so humor me supreme. I think the use of 'stooped' in the first stanza is not a strong enough descriptor. I also think that the second stanza (the double use of leaves in particular) actually cheapens the sentiment behind what you are getting at.
We can all only wish that our poems weather like stone: lasting a mortal eternity, yet yielding to the wisdom of of those who tread after.
replying on Sagadahoc to Hudson by http://mulberryfairy
10 Aug 2003, 1:33 AM
Except for the being stranded part. That was pretty tragic. Or was it?
on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8
7 Aug 2003, 10:53 AM
nod
replying on Angel by abecedarian
7 Aug 2003, 12:17 AM
I'm amazed at the strength of polarity here. Is your (mulberry and horus/s/..) distaste for angels purely the way I've presented angels, is it a reaction to their general overuse in unskilled 'poetry', or is it a defiance to their religious connection, or is it a genuine wierding?
replying on Angel by abecedarian
7 Aug 2003, 12:11 AM
The interesting thing about angels is that almost everyone has very strong feelings about them (good or bad or strange) regardless of religious interpretation. You appear to have an unbendable vision yourself of what they look like.
One of the things that intrigued me about this dream was to finally discover that my subconscious picture of an angel massively tied to my anima. I certainly would not something simultaneously pure and sexual a light read.
But to be humble, my eyes and mind are better than my tongue.
One of the things that intrigued me about this dream was to finally discover that my subconscious picture of an angel massively tied to my anima. I certainly would not something simultaneously pure and sexual a light read.
But to be humble, my eyes and mind are better than my tongue.
replying on Angel by abecedarian
6 Aug 2003, 5:49 PM
s'okay mulberry, y'know... his condition and all
on DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos
29 Jul 2003, 4:27 PM
DJ Jeremi spins irony. Huddie Ledbetter rolls in his grave.
on Octopussed by <{Baba^Yaga}>
28 Jul 2003, 6:44 PM
I've seen several animals get the axe recently: a roach, a fox, and now an octopus. Fry them all up, I say, and lets have one last giant barbeque.
on Lord of the Swines by <{Baba^Yaga}>
28 Jul 2003, 6:29 PM
This thing about put me in a legoleptic fit, so it certainly is a good thing that I am lamiacious, and therefore not affected by such afflictions. Certainly this is better than some of the the lalochezia that usually occurs here.
on 8:45 AM Dentist Appointment by http://mulberryfairy
25 Jul 2003, 10:00 AM
You lied to your dentist!?
If you can't trust your friendly caring and sensitive dentist, who can you trust? Certainly not us!
If you can't trust your friendly caring and sensitive dentist, who can you trust? Certainly not us!
on Ode to a Fox Cub by http://mulberryfairy
25 Jul 2003, 9:42 AM
I know exactly how you feel. I was worried about exploring your poem too thoroughly when I found it lying here. An unhappy and overly visible grave for a poem like this.
on Voluptuous, Blonde Bird-Woman by http://mulberryfairy
24 Jul 2003, 9:27 AM
Tales from the front?
on Phone Support: To Lee by http://mulberryfairy
24 Jul 2003, 9:24 AM
They say that people who serve together in wartime form a bond closer than most people ever feel. You would do anything for your brother (sister).
Interesting twist that it wasn't a war that created the bond. Maybe rape is as tough as war.
Interesting twist that it wasn't a war that created the bond. Maybe rape is as tough as war.