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Pina Colada Belle (Free verse) by Don-Quixote
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My dear seraphic girlie
that wore that purple rose dress,
do you remember them
smoke filled nights?
We would
laugh,
inbetween the clink
of pina coloda glasses.
You would be yappin
like some amphetamine
laboratory experiment,
and I'd listen to your voice,
while trying my best to peer
into those brown eyes
that you loved to hide
behind your long bangs.
I can still smell the candles
that were hung over the screen door.
Vanilla, you loved that aroma...
There were not many
that could sit there
and actually tollerate
the endless rant.
You might have been talking about pluto,
but my ears never paid any attention to the words
they would just record the melody of your sonance...
We would perch our intoxicated selves
on the wooden bench,
watching the sun rise.
Well, you were always
the one gazing at the
ascension of earth's
mellow yellow star.
You never knew that
my eyes took photographs
of those pulchritudinous hands,
holding that white alcoholic slurpee.
I love this oil painted memory the most:
Your elfin hand revealing
those brown scintillant orbs,
as you pushed that natural veil
back and pinned it neatly
behind your ear.
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I AM PROUD TO BE THE MUSH MASTER, TOKE MY SNAKE!!!
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4346
Posted: August 10, 2003 1:31 AM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2003 3:22 AM PDT
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Don Quixote would never apologize, too immersed in what he is to be anything but brave.
Sometimes we are what we are, expectant filter be damned. A 0 until you remove the apology. :)
-runs nekkid into the forests on an lsd and amt adventure-
HOLY SHIT LOOK AT THAT LECTRIC LIGHTIN@!?!?!