replying on Freeform (No votes yet) 0 comments by abecedarian
2 Jul 2003, 5:45 PM
One of us has the wrong impression of what my name means :)
replying on The Wonderful Creators by abecedarian
2 Jul 2003, 5:35 PM
Oh Bachus, you inspire me
(see Poem Ranker please, I wish you wouldt)
(see Poem Ranker please, I wish you wouldt)
replying on haunting by abecedarian
2 Jul 2003, 5:32 PM
unless I do my typing at 'work' (I do haunt that place occassionally, too)
on Good prevails by DeadtotheWorld
1 Jul 2003, 3:06 PM
This poemmy poem poem would actually make a nice 2-10 minute animation if done right.
I like 'winged rats for as they seem'. Very old school construction (old like Will Shakey, not like Run DMC)
I like 'winged rats for as they seem'. Very old school construction (old like Will Shakey, not like Run DMC)
on Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus
1 Jul 2003, 3:01 PM
I had a friend who once a year burned everything that made him sentimental. I never asked him if he burned his spit pies. Do they burn?
(must be a nice collection of memories)
(must be a nice collection of memories)
on Quisling & white wine by horus8
1 Jul 2003, 2:46 PM
An old woman sits on a park bench watching people pass by. She smiles as she watches a young skinhead walk by with his radio blaring some heavy metal song:
DUN DA DA DUN DA DA DUN DA DA NAAAA NAAAA!
(It's "The song of choice" coopted by the fascist, or so Peggy Seeger tells me)
DUN DA DA DUN DA DA DUN DA DA NAAAA NAAAA!
(It's "The song of choice" coopted by the fascist, or so Peggy Seeger tells me)
on Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe
1 Jul 2003, 2:31 PM
How am I to place you in a nice neatly numbered category if I don't know what you are saying?
We need Tagalog for Dummies!
(at every sunrise we must all use a dictionary)
Oh well, points for speaking a language that I can't translate well enough to criticize you.
We need Tagalog for Dummies!
(at every sunrise we must all use a dictionary)
Oh well, points for speaking a language that I can't translate well enough to criticize you.
on The Forest Child by forestchild7
18 Jul 2002, 9:44 PM
Abecedarian award
(an unsolicited award for poems receiving undeserved low scores)
(an unsolicited award for poems receiving undeserved low scores)
on If We Must Die by kidz
18 Jul 2002, 9:37 PM
oh please, worth more than a four at least
on Death's Cold Eyes by forestchild7
11 Jul 2002, 8:28 PM
Hy do I feel like you've just read a bunch of poetry by John Donne? :)