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The Wonderful Creators (Free verse) by abecedarian If you can make the sun rise
I will bring down the rain
With arms spread wide we are ready to begin
I will watch the sun rise
if you will dance in the rain
the wonderful creators
Yes, we have limitations
The pain of weakness can make you scream
But water never cries -
too immersed in what it is to be anything but wet
Up the ladder:
Learning Self
Down the ladder:
My Boyfriend's Afro Pick
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Posted: July 29, 2002 10:22 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2002 10:22 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.585435 Overall Rank: 619 Comments:
This is a good moment of negative capability and just living rather than worrying about living. I like it.
It's raining in Baltimore, so I'll dance in the rain if you'll watch the sun rise. Watch out for pupil scarring. This would make a good song.
Exciting.
Simple, beautiful, a breath of fresh air. Almost mental music. (10)
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(see Poem Ranker please, I wish you wouldt)