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The Wonderful Creators (Free verse) by abecedarian

If you can make the sun rise I will bring down the rain With arms spread wide we are ready to begin I will watch the sun rise if you will dance in the rain the wonderful creators Yes, we have limitations The pain of weakness can make you scream But water never cries - too immersed in what it is to be anything but wet

Christof 23-Aug-02/3:28 AM
This is a good moment of negative capability and just living rather than worrying about living. I like it.




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