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Death's Cold Eyes (Free verse) by forestchild7
Through Death's cold eyes I see
pain and immaturity.
Though love is true and strong
hate doth flow deep and long.
Fighting doth cause hurting
so why then, art thou killing?
The reasons art simple
I stand before a symbol.
It shows hateness and death
yet makes soldiers out of breath.
Thou love it yet hate it
but thou always obey it.
Thou rule with ruthlessness
but thou wilt one day be less.
The reasons art clear now,
thou hast made a vow.
To rid the earth of thine enemies
and to vanquish them with ease.
The death's shalt not go on forever
and thine pain shall end never.
Though Death looks with cold eyes
it see's through thy lies.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.7272727
Weighted score: 4.3636365
Overall Rank: 13045
Posted: July 7, 2002 12:47 PM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2002 12:47 PM PDT
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