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haunting (Free verse) by abecedarian
so is this the price of a silent life, haunting all these years my own house only to find it empty?

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.111111
Weighted score: 6.058416
Overall Rank: 1184
Posted: July 11, 2002 8:04 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 8:04 PM PDT
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[5] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.96.187 | 16-Jul-02/10:24 PM | Reply
Apparently there's a computer there.
[n/a] abecedarian @ 164.67.82.153 > -=SeTTle=- | 2-Jul-03/5:32 PM | Reply
unless I do my typing at 'work' (I do haunt that place occassionally, too)
[7] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.11 | 15-Aug-02/8:36 AM | Reply
decent words--perhaps you could toy with the line breaks to make it even better.
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