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Freeform (No votes yet) 0 comments (Free verse) by abecedarian I place my words in a raft
and send them to this place
but they go unadmired
lost in a sea of their own visibility
Up the ladder:
Smoke
Down the ladder:
Perversions
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Posted: July 30, 2002 11:22 PM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2002 11:33 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.164257 Overall Rank: 1045 Comments:
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==Doylum @ 213.122.120.49
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4-Aug-02/1:30 PM
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You want comment boy, comment, and yet when you recive the sage words of (i think you will like the new addition to my name suggested by Handsome Pete) Bodh'sattva Doylum you delete them. W-hell you insufferable young pup i've a good mind to lash you till your whinnets fall of for yer impudence. However i shall leave you be for the time being please see that it does not happen again. You have been warned, mother is oiling the flail.
You want comment boy, comment, and yet when you recive the sage words of (i think you will like the new addition to my name suggested by Handsome Pete) Bodh'sattva Doylum you delete them. W-hell you insufferable young pup i've a good mind to lash you till your whinnets fall of for yer impudence. However i shall leave you be for the time being please see that it does not happen again. You have been warned, mother is oiling the flail.
sorry?
i feel your pain
It is the same for us all. By the way, if you are an abecedarian don't you believe that it's wrong to learn to read? What are you doing on a poetry site?
One of us has the wrong impression of what my name means :)
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