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I place my words in a raft and send them to this place but they go unadmired lost in a sea of their own visibility

==Doylum 4-Aug-02/1:30 PM
You want comment boy, comment, and yet when you recive the sage words of (i think you will like the new addition to my name suggested by Handsome Pete) Bodh'sattva Doylum you delete them. W-hell you insufferable young pup i've a good mind to lash you till your whinnets fall of for yer impudence. However i shall leave you be for the time being please see that it does not happen again. You have been warned, mother is oiling the flail.




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