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Free verse № 3296

The Forest Child

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Jul 2002 · 5 comments

she lays there, flat on her back, with only the clouds to contend with; they wink at her, and let her gaze flow from blue to white; as the sun blazes in the sky, the world seems to stop, and she just relaxes with no cares in the world; some things are not known, but to her everything is worth knowing; the knowledge of a lifetime resides in her, and all she does is lay there, letting the soft breeze lull to her to sleep; when she wakes up, it is dark outside, but she does not worry; she gets up, greets the moon, and goes back to her home; as the stars shine and glitter, she knows tomorrow will be a good day...

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5 comments

[7] mrfiend 7-Jul-02/1:01 PM Reply
optimist eh?
[n/a] razorgrin 10-Jul-02/12:08 PM Reply
Nice.Nothing wrong with optimism.
[10] abecedarian 18-Jul-02/9:44 PM Reply
Abecedarian award
(an unsolicited award for poems receiving undeserved low scores)
[10] ==Doylum 19-Jul-02/5:38 AM Reply
Oh how luvely, lots of smashing nature thingys super and floewery, you relly must be close to nature, I get a reel feel of earthyness. Owwever you have neglekted to mention pixies and elfs and ogers and trolls i feel you work best with these otherworldly themes being as spiritual as you is, but I shall still reward you with a perfect 10.
Don't ye just love crusties
[6] -=SeTTle=- 30-Jul-02/8:43 PM Reply
good GOD you and -=Dark_Angel=- really have your personas figured out.