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S (Haiku) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
Let S be the set containing my boxing fist and your fucking face
Up the ladder: Love Poem
Down the ladder: The Forest Child
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.285714
Weighted score: 5.285008
Overall Rank: 3766
Posted: May 12, 2002 12:43 PM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2002 12:43 PM PDT
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[10] ErgoErgun @ | 12-May-02/1:22 PM | Reply
This is fucking genius! References to math, intellectualism, athletics, competition, struggle with implicit emotion, agression, and blow jobs (fucking face) all rolled into a simple Haiku! I bow in your wake.
[8] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Aug-02/4:34 PM | Reply
You are the Mike tyson of the S world. Pound on! Pound on!
[n/a] Lenore @ 64.252.102.196 | 30-Aug-02/8:35 PM | Reply
I noticed you were Short on S. Not one JeSu could hold it on itS end.
Now you go and do thiS? What would happen if you put it where it belongS? Is it Sin?
[5] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.69 | 17-Sep-02/7:29 AM | Reply
perplexingly violent.
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