Love Poem

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 3 comments

I cannot write you. Only moments, or a kiss --- But not all of you.

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20 votes so far. Yours would make 21.20 votes so far

[6] anonymous 10-May-02/9:21 AM Reply

cool. but not exactly a haiku. the third thought isn't supposed to mirror but offset the first two thoughts

[9] webguy 16-Jul-02/8:03 AM Reply

your haiku is great:
hails the concept of being
in a master stroke.

[5] horus8 16-Jul-02/12:06 PM Reply

And i thought i was cryptic