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Love Poem (Haiku) by ferociouskitty I cannot write you.
Only moments, or a kiss ---
But not all of you.
Up the ladder:
Peridot
Down the ladder:
S
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Posted: May 10, 2002 8:02 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 8:02 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2857723 Overall Rank: 3765 Comments:
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10-May-02/9:21 AM
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cool. but not exactly a haiku. the third thought isn't supposed to mirror but offset the first two thoughts
your haiku is great:
hails the concept of being in a master stroke.
And i thought i was cryptic
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