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Good prevails (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld Creeping creatures in the starry star sky
The gloomiest of all freezing nights,
Is when these immortals roam and seek
They can not see for they can not be seen,
For they run in laughter to spread disasters
Shadow little Gremlins with crippling little smiles
Winged rats for as they seem,
Running and hiding to be somewhat free
For these pests turn to stone by day
Gargoyles rule to seize the hours of darkness
And all seems ok
Which they can only rule by power and oblige
So soon they fall and goodness prevails to be mystic
Up the ladder:
B-Movie Video Voiceover Guy
Down the ladder:
Independence Day (the speech from the film)
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Posted: July 1, 2003 12:46 PM PDT; Last modified: July 1, 2003 12:46 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11831 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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1-Jul-03/1:29 PM
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Jesus, right when I think your poetry has hit rock fucking moist stinky lightless bottom, you holler out "China or bust", and start digging again. Amazing.
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DeadtotheWorld @ 12.80.122.217
> horus8
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1-Jul-03/7:50 PM
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Alright the odd thing is, I respect you and your work, inspite of the way you just thrash on poeple and their work, whatever man its still cool
This poemmy poem poem would actually make a nice 2-10 minute animation if done right.
I like 'winged rats for as they seem'. Very old school construction (old like Will Shakey, not like Run DMC) 199 view(s)
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