Good prevails

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 Jul 2003 · 3 comments

Creeping creatures in the starry star sky The gloomiest of all freezing nights, Is when these immortals roam and seek They can not see for they can not be seen, For they run in laughter to spread disasters Shadow little Gremlins with crippling little smiles Winged rats for as they seem, Running and hiding to be somewhat free For these pests turn to stone by day Gargoyles rule to seize the hours of darkness And all seems ok Which they can only rule by power and oblige So soon they fall and goodness prevails to be mystic

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[1] horus8 1-Jul-03/1:29 PM Reply

Jesus, right when I think your poetry has hit rock fucking moist stinky lightless bottom, you holler out "China or bust", and start digging again. Amazing.

[n/a] DeadtotheWorld › horus8 1-Jul-03/7:50 PM Reply

Alright the odd thing is, I respect you and your work, inspite of the way you just thrash on poeple and their work, whatever man its still cool

[6] abecedarian 1-Jul-03/3:06 PM Reply

This poemmy poem poem would actually make a nice 2-10 minute animation if done right.

I like 'winged rats for as they seem'. Very old school construction (old like Will Shakey, not like Run DMC)